Thanks guys... will try to have better airflow next time...
Oh and btw the second clip was a bit badly mixed last time (vocals a bit too loud, muffled ) the
file in the link is updated with a better version... (sounds crisper)
@napilopez: well actually i myself know there are around 10 or so pitch mess ups even in the second clip :P ... i dont think i can give any excuse for those
really... just have to keep practicing my technique until it becomes easier to sing and hence easier to sing on pitch