You've got style, man. I love that I can really enjoy you full song recordings, just musically. I think you might be slightly higher larynxed that would
sound best, such when you say "they call"(the rising sun). But honestly, I'm being pretty nitpicky. I thought it was really good. Try the stomach
thing vince suggested to see how it works for you. It's never been of any use to me(really, it just messes me up, if anything), but I don't deny it
might helps others. I didn't really notice the pitch issues vince mentioned though, except for a singular tiny moment. I'm focusing on your second
clip, btw.
Great job dude! You've come a long way. And your diction is wayyyy clearer as well ^_^.