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Nov 14 09 1:14 AM

Actually, that's not bad at all. I really like the distortion you did with your voice at the end. The only part that really stuck out to me was the beginning. When you're not singing with complete cord closure, you have to be very careful of your tone. You still want the same open feeling, don't close it down like I hear you doing. Also, make sure you are breathing with your stomach. It make a huge difference for me. That might be able to help you with your pitch issues at the beginning. Overall though, not bad.